A while back I was searching for the rest of the poem that contains the line "...the best laid plans of mice and men oft-times go awry..."
I knew that was the line I wanted to find, and I even had a suspicion that the poet was Scottish.
So here's the challenge for today:
What WAS the original poem? And, just as important, what is the rest of the stanza in which this line appears?
Search on!
Daniel, I don't know if it was just pure luck or skills, but I found the complete poem within a few clicks.
ReplyDeleteFirst I highlighted the phrase [best laid plans of mice and men oft-times] and with a right click of the mouse the first Google result brought me to: http://www.quotelady.com/subjects/plan.html
I could read there that this wasn’t a correct quote, but that it comes from a poem of Robert Burns: “To a Mouse”. Again using Google [Robert Burns "To a Mouse"] brought me to the complete poem at: http://www.electricscotland.com/burns/mouse.html
The rest of the stanza in which the misquoted line appears:
But Mousie, thou are no thy-lane,
In proving foresight may be vain:
The best laid schemes o' Mice an' Men,
Gang aft agley,
An' lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
For promis'd joy
For a standard English translation and more background information: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/To_a_Mouse
Greetings from the Netherlands,
Hans
I started with your line [the best laid plans of mice and men oft-times go awry] but left off the quotation marks figuring that if you were so sure about the phrase that there was something wrong with that exact phrase. The results for the above search proved that there were others who also thought that was the phrase.
ReplyDeleteThe sixth result down showed a different but similar phrase (The best laid schemes of mice and men / Go oft awry.) on a Wikipedia entry about Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck.
https://secure.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/wiki/Of_Mice_and_Men
The entry mentions that "Of Mice and Men" comes from a phrase in the poem "To A Mouse, on Turning Her Up in Her Nest with the Plough" by Robert Burns dated 1785.
https://secure.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/wiki/To_a_Mouse
The rest of the stanza as stated there is:
But Mousie, thou art no thy lane,
In proving foresight may be vain:
The best-laid schemes o' mice an' men
Gang aft agley,
An' lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
For promis'd joy!
i found a similar issue when forward thinking what will happen if a search engine starts saying what's true and what's false in our lives (http://www.harrr.org/rrr/extended-did-you-mean/ )
ReplyDeleteTo A Mouse
ReplyDeleteBy Robert Burns 25 January 1759 – 21 July 1796)
Indeed Scottish!
[..]
But Mousie, thou are no thy-lane,
In proving foresight may be vain:
The best laid schemes o' Mice an' Men,
Gang aft agley,
An' lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
For promis'd joy!
[..]
http://www.electricscotland.com/burns/mouse.html
Regards
jpp